Нда, плохой яой везде одинаковый, поняла я, и вечна и вездесуща бозответная любовь Джедайта к Нефриту. А также вечна, неизбывна и вездесуща милая схемка "вот я умру, а они будут плакать!":
He glared at the reflection in his mirror. The bruises. The scrapes. The mussed blonde hair. The tortured blue eyes, red and swollen from crying. The pale, washed-out skin.
Jadeite collapsed to his knees, his head in his hands as his eyes overflowed once more. He loved Nephrite with all his heart and soul, and knowing he viewed him as worthless was the most painful feeling in existence...one that wrenched at his soul, stabbed at his heart like a thousand swords. Just living each day, knowing Nephrite couldn't care less about him or his feelings hurt him so much it was all he could do not to break down...
Нефрит, конечно, ничего плохого не имел в виду:
Meanwhile, Nephrite was wandering through corridors, a shadow of guilt hanging over him. The hurtful things he had shouted at Jadeite a while ago still repeated in his mind as he cursed his temper. How could he have laid into him like that? He didn't show it very often, but in truth, he really did care about Jadeite. A lot. He didn't mean to hurt him by being so cold and angry all the time, but he just couldn't help it sometimes.
Кстати, последнее предложение, думаю я, - вина американского гениального дубляжа, как бы там ни было. Там Нефрит ну очень angry — and so brutal. О, как он ррычал, когда мочил укравших Нару юм! Напомню, в оригинальной озвучке он делал это молча.
Хотя нефритово имя пишется правильно, (a не как "Нефлайт"), но это, наверное, уже фэндомная традиция. У нас, вон, принято писать "Нефрит", а не "Нефрайт". Но "Джедайт", а не "Жадеит". Но "Берилл", а не "королева Погибель" (как это было в русской озвучке). И т.д.
"Jadeite...oh, Jadeite, what have I done!" he cried out, impulsively gathering the blonde in his arms. Jadeite only smiled weakly, his eyes just barely open as he looked up at Nephrite.
"Nephrite-sama...before I die, I must tell you...my true feelings," he whispered, taking Nephrite's hand in his own. Blood dripped from Jadeite onto Nephrite's uniform, but Nephrite couldn't care less.
"Jadeite..."
"I...love you, Nephrite-sama...I always have...just...remember that...it's all I ask..."
я рыдайу, люди. Это так touching. Не верите? Я действительно рыдайу. О да, жаль, в голос не могу, все-таки, на работе.

"Goodbye, Nephrite-sama..." With those final words, Jadeite's eyes closed for the last time...never to open again...
"JADEITE!"
"Jadeite...gomen nasai..." he sobbed as he rocked back and forth, tears streaming down his cheeks.
"...I love you..."
Wait...he loved Jadeite! But...how!
А потом Нефрит совершит радостное самоубийство вслед за Дж. Конец.
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